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DamianHex
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PostSubject: Not REALLY a poem but...   Not REALLY a poem but... EmptyWed 22 Mar - 16:09

"Oh, Hello....Yeah I recognize you now...
You're the one that won't leave me alone...
The one that constantly demands more and more from me when you know I have nothing left to give...
The one who made me cry when I thought I had no tears left to shed...
It's been awhile since I've seen you...but I haven't forgotton...
You're the one who damn near drove me crazy....
The vampire that sucked the joy from my soul...
The Demon who seems to live only to haunt me and make me suffer.....
So how have you been?
I must admit you're looking pretty good....
Yeah, I know we don't talk very much anymore but....
Well.....
Sometimes the man in the mirror is just too hard to face...."
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Cassie
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PostSubject: Re: Not REALLY a poem but...   Not REALLY a poem but... EmptyWed 22 Mar - 18:30

It's truly good, Mark, because it reaches out ot the public, makes me feel I'm the one looking into the mirror..... Well, maybe I am...

Anyway, VERY insightful and honest =) loved it!
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PostSubject: Re: Not REALLY a poem but...   Not REALLY a poem but... EmptyMon 27 Mar - 21:23

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